Monday, 13 November 2017

Quick Write Term 4


We have been learning to write ‘Quick Writes.’  This is where you are given something to write about (a writing prompt) and you only have 10minutes to write as much as possible using this writing prompt.
1. FIREWORKS
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As I entered the courtyard I saw gleaming colors of karaka/orange, waiporoporo/purple and whero/red it was beautiful. The fireworks colors covered  the courtyard. It was dense, heavy, suffocating everyone. It was like I was in a battle field with never ending gun fire.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Lincoln, you used great Te Reo in your quick write.

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