Persuasive Writing

We have been having a go at writing a piece of persuasive writing. Here is my piece of writing about why we should fix our field.

Title A Short Statement about the topic. eg. ‘Rugby League Is A Great Sport’	Fix Our whīra/Field
Overview/ Statement of position A brief statement of your view about the topic.  What you believe or want to argue.	I strongly believe we should fix our whīra/field because it adds more space to the school, also it can keep people fit, and people can play, do running races, train and people can get fresh air.
Series of Arguments Reasons Your points supporting your view about the topic.  Your arguments to support your statement and information to support these arguments. Remember -argument -supporting detail, reasons, examples	firstly, we need to fix the whīra/field it adds more space to the school and we need some soft grass in the school
	secondly, it can keep people fit and sometimes balls go over the fens and it takes ages to get them back
	thirdly, people can play, do running races, train. people also get hurt on the concret.
Concluding statement Summing it up.  A summary of your arguments and your view on the topic.	in conclusion we need to fix our whīra/field because it adds more space to the school, sometimes balls go over the fens and it takes ages to get them back,  people can play, do running races and train.

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THE TREATY OF WAITANGI

One News by Lincoln R the News Man, and Caleb as the Music Man

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