Wednesday, 27 September 2017

The Beekeeper

Quick Write Number One - The Beekeeper

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For the next two weeks we are going to work on ‘Quick Writes.’  This is  where you are given something to write about (a writing prompt) and you only have 10mins to write as much as possible using this writing prompt.

For our writing prompts we will use either images or short videos.

The purpose of this is to practise writing fluently.

When we look at our writing prompt we will have about 10-15 mins to discuss it and brainstorm some ideas and vocabulary.   

Our learning goals are to:
-write a description, using powerful words and phrases
-include some Te Reo Māori
-carefully check that our sentences make sense and have correct punctuation and spelling.

When we are writing we need to think about…

  1. What do I want my reader to see?
2) What do I want my reader to hear?
3) What do I want my reader to smell?
Tips:
-look closely at the picture or video
-think about the three key questions and the learning goalsImage result for honey title
-give yourself time to plan and write

Do your writing here             
I walked up to the beehive as calm as a cat stalking its prey. I lifted up the honey frame and smelt the sweet yummy sugary honey .  Rendered ImageImage result for honey pngImage result for honey pngImage result for honey pngImage result for honey png

Friday, 22 September 2017

Robot Rampage

We have been learning to write stories. Here is my work. 


Elections Topic

This month we have been working on the elections and My friends and I have made up a political party and we made a poster.  Here is our work.