I am learning to use language features to make my writing interesting and engaging for the reader.
I am learning to think carefully about the words I use so that my writing is descriptive and engaging for the reader.
I am learning to add an appropriate visual to my work
I will be successful when I can show….
-I have used some language features to make my writing interesting and engaging (smile, metaphor, alliteration, onomatopoeia, rhyme)
-I have carefully chosen some interesting words to include in my writing
-I have some descriptive words in my writing (adjectives)
-I have added a photo to my writing
MY HAIR
My huru/hair is beautiful. I love my fringe how it swishis to the side. My hair is thick with brown and black with highlights of blonde. I can comb my hair to a combover and style it how I want. My huru/hair is as soft and as thick as a lions mane. I love my huru/hair so much.
Thanks for sharing again Lincoln, I love your hair too! I also love the photo of you making pizza, it looks like you were having a fabulous time.
ReplyDeleteGreat writing, Lincoln. When you showed me this work last week I especially liked the way you were able to show me how you had met the learning intentions. You certainly have used great language features in this writing. How lucky you are to have a lion's mane!
ReplyDelete