Wednesday, 7 November 2018
Monday, 5 November 2018
THE ABANDONED COTTAGE
At the moment in class we have been working on descriptive writing. we have been using pictures to give us ideas of what to write about. here is a piece of writing i did.
Click here for a link to the original work
Click here for a link to the original work
THE ABANDONED COTTAGE
On sunday I was playing in the woods when i got lost
i stumbled into an abandoned cottage. i went inside
where i find a book with ripped pages and it smelled
like dust. i open it then all of a sudden spiders crawled out.
I JUMPED BACK DROPPING THE BOOK ON THE FLOOR!
The floor broke and fell into a pit along with me….
My legs were akeng. i must have been 60 meters into
the ground. there was no way back up. then i noticed
an old, rickety door. i opened it. it fell off its hinges CRASH!!!
There was nothing in there except for a coffin. it opened.
i almost fainted!! a dead thing emerged from the coffin! it was
after me! i ran out trying every way possible to climb out……
i stumbled into an abandoned cottage. i went inside
where i find a book with ripped pages and it smelled
like dust. i open it then all of a sudden spiders crawled out.
I JUMPED BACK DROPPING THE BOOK ON THE FLOOR!
The floor broke and fell into a pit along with me….
My legs were akeng. i must have been 60 meters into
the ground. there was no way back up. then i noticed
an old, rickety door. i opened it. it fell off its hinges CRASH!!!
There was nothing in there except for a coffin. it opened.
i almost fainted!! a dead thing emerged from the coffin! it was
after me! i ran out trying every way possible to climb out……
THE END
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