Friday, 22 June 2018

Mini Pizza

Today me and my class had another year 6 tech challenge. David, Alex and Rhys and I were in a group. We made mini pizzas  and they were so tasty.

Wednesday, 20 June 2018

Tuesday, 19 June 2018

Space Timeline Reading Task

Space timeline Reading tasks.




Term 2 Weeks 5-6


Purpose of this reading activity is to: increase our knowledge of space
exploration and understand how our knowledge
and ideas about space have changed over time (science).
We are also learning to read non-fiction texts
and use our writing skills to share our understanding of this topic and
our ideas (literacy). Throughout this task we will need to use the skills of
‘Thinking’ and using ‘Language, Symbols and Text.’


Learning Intentions
I am learning to skim and scan text to identify the main ideas.
I am learning to locate the key sentences and questions in texts.
I am learning to use sub-headings to guide me to the main ideas in text.
I am learning to summarise the main ideas in the texts I read.
(from the Karoro Programme of work for Reading)


Success Criteria
I will be successful when I can show….
-I have have scanned text to find key ideas.
-I have summarised the main ideas from the reading.
-I have put my answers in chronological order.

Focus


We are looking at using non-fiction text to increase our knowledge in our science topic;
SPACE. Your aim is to read and understand the timeline reading and use this knowledge
to complete the reading activity below.

First, Read the timeline cards. Click here for the space timeline pdf

Second, We will discuss what you have read. This will be a good time to ask questions
about anything you are unsure of.


Third, do your reading tasks.


Fourth, complete your reading activity. Remember to proofread, check spelling and punctuation.
Then do a self assessment and a peer assessment. Check it with a teacher.














Reading Activity


View and read the space timeline on the classroom walls. Think about
how how our theories/ideas and understandings about the universe and
Earth’s place in it has changed over time.


Answer the following questions.
Your answers need to be full sentences.
After you have answered all the questions please put them in
chronological order (time order, oldest first)

5) What are two things that Galileo discovered? The moons of Jupiter
and the loner crater on venus.  1610


9) Who discovered the first asteroid? The person that found the first
asteroid was Giuseppe Piazzi. 1801


2) What was Sputnik 1? It was a Russian satellite (1957).


3) In what year was NASA founded? And what does NASA mean?
It was founded in (1958) and NASA means (National Aeronautics and
Space Administration)    :)


6) Who was the first woman in space? And where was she from?  
It was Valentina Tereshkova from Russia 1964)


Where did Mariner 4 fly past? Mariner 4 flew past Mars in (1965)


7) In what year did Apollo 11 land on the moon? 1969


10) What country launched Voyager probes 1 and 2 into deep space?
America 1977

8) What happened that led to all space shuttles being grounded for 3 years?
a space shuttle blew up after launch in 1986
11) When was the international space station completed? 1986-  2010

1)How long did it take for the Cassini probe to arrive at Saturn? It took nearl
y seven years (2004).

12) What was interesting about New Horizons information about Pluto?
Pluto is 50 miles bigger than it first was 2015


YOUR OPINION
After reading this information...


  1. Who do you think made the biggest contribution to our understanding
  2. of space? Why? (summarising key ideas) Galileo galilei because he made
  3. the first telescope.


    2) What do you think was the most important machine or invention
in helping us investigate space? Why? (summarising key ideas) the Telescope
because it was the very first thing to look into space. It let  us see things we
could not see before


    3) What would you like to investigate about space? Why? Black holes
I would like to know what happens if you go in one.


Self and Peer Assessment.

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Self and Peer Assessment
Success Criteria


I will be successful when I can show….
-I have have scanned text to find key ideas.
-I have summarised the main ideas from the reading.
- I have put my answers in chronological order.

Success criteria 1: I have have scanned text to find key ideas (I have been able to answer the questions).
        
                          Achieved well      Achieved some Achieved little     Not achieved
Me




My partner






Success criteria 2: -I have summarised the main ideas from the reading.
      
                          Achieved well      Achieved some Achieved little     Not achieved
Me




My partner





Success criteria 3: I have put my answers in correct chronological order.
        
                          Achieved well      Achieved some Achieved little     Not achieved
Me




My partner



























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Thursday, 14 June 2018

Planet Writing

Create and Describe Your Own Planet -
Description writing task
Term 2 Weeks 5-6


Purpose of this piece of writing is to:


Learning Intentions
I am learning to use language features to make
my writing interesting and engaging for the reader.
I am learning to use topic-specific vocabulary.
I am learning to include Te Reo Māori words in my writing.


I will be successful when I can show….
-I have used some language features
to make my writing interesting and
engaging (simile, metaphor, alliteration, onomatopoeia, rhyme)
-I have carefully chosen some topic
specific words to include in my writing.
-I have used some Te Reo Māori


Focus


We are continuing to look at descriptive writing. This week you are writing a
descriptive piece of writing to promote your imaginary planet. You aim is to convince people to move
to you
r planet. You want your writing to allow the reader to be able to imagine what it is like on your planet.


First, we will look at an excerpt
of a video describing the moon from the Avatar movie. Click here to get to video= Pandora.


Second, we will discuss together what
you will need in your work to make it successful and
look at how to plan our work. Then you will plan your work and check with a teacher
before you start writing.


Third, do your piece of writing.

Fourth, complete you piece of writing. Remember
to proof-read (check spelling and punctuation) and edit (does it make sense? do
you need to change any sentences?) yourself and with a buddy and fill in your self and
peer-assessment. Check it with a teacher.

my writing



Image by FlamingText.com


Mandalore is a planet/whetūao in the outer rim of an
unknown galaxy/ikurangi far far away. Mandalore does
not orbit a planet. It has humongous scorching deserts with
cities as big as the Earth! The deserts are vast plains with
cracks and dust everywhere with nothing in sight except
orange/karaka and yellow/pungapunga dust and sand.
There are scavengers and pirates scavenging remains
of ruined rusty broken starships. The cities have uneven
gravity and are mostly made up of credit factories
(Credit factories are basically money factories) and trading
stands.

Most dangers are scavengers, pirates and death watch.
The death watch are mandalorians that kill anyone.
They don’t have a permanent base because they move
around lots. But once they find a good spot with a mine so
they can mine and make metal so they can make more armor
for new troops. But once all the metal is gone they move to
another spot and the leader of the death watch is pre vizsla
and he has a gun and the darksaber.

The planit is lead by Duchess Satine
Kryze but was overthrown by darth Maul and Savage
Opress and the death watch. but darth maul was the new
leader because he killed Pre Vizsla. But some of the death
watch did not want to be on darth maul’s team so they tried to
kill darth maul but he killed them. I believe that you definitely
do not want to go to mandalore AT ALL!

By Lincoln .R.

Friday, 8 June 2018

Year Six Tech Challenge

This week the year six's did another Tech Challenge. This week we baked chocolate sponge cake. In my group there was me, Alex, Nathan K and David. We had to show that we could work as a team. I,m really looking forward to eating it.

Friday, 1 June 2018

Best Part Of Me

I am learning to use language features to make my writing interesting and engaging for the reader.
I am learning to think carefully about the words I use so that my writing is descriptive and engaging for the reader.
I am learning to add an appropriate visual to my work

I will be successful when I can show….
-I have used some language features to make my writing interesting and engaging (smile, metaphor, alliteration, onomatopoeia, rhyme)
-I have carefully chosen some interesting words to include in my writing
-I have some descriptive words in my writing (adjectives)

-I have added a photo to my writing




MY HAIR
My huru/hair is beautiful. I love my fringe how it swishis to the side. My hair is thick with brown and black with highlights of blonde. I can comb my hair to a combover and style it how I want. My huru/hair is as soft and as thick as a lions mane. I love my huru/hair so much.

Year 6 Teach Challenge

Today it was the year 6 tech challenge today. We were cooking pizzas. The people in my group were Lily, Tyler and Ethan. We used ham, pasta sauce and pineapple and cheese. It was so fun.